If I could get some comments on this POEM of mine ! Thanks?

It's a sad poem.. Seems like you are having a hard time accepting that what happened before can't come back. If it's your story, I encourage you to speak up what you feel for that person. Whatever the situation you have right now, you must tell her how you feel. If it doesn't work, then, try your best to forget so you can move on with your life.. to stop your misery..